Today, we had our business presented for our three mentors. Each group only had 6 minutes in total, so if one group-member exceeded 1 minute, the next group-members would have less time to talk about their part in the business.
The feedback we got for our presentation, was that we should be more clear about our business concept, and link everything together. Such as, what is the link between our products and our logo? What is the link between the rabbit and the cookie it is eating? What is the link between our business and the charity we have chosen to support? Why a children's charity? And so on.
Our presentation was recorded on video, and sent to us through email to have a look at it and think about areas to improve for our next presentation, which we will be assessed on. We have two weeks from now on to improve our business concept and present our ideas again.
We will take this feedback with us and do our best in week 11. In addition, we also need to produce a business plan over the next couple of weeks. And week 12, is the time for the Christmas market events. A busy period is a head of us!